Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 27, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Bella, you have used some really good adjectives to describe the different parts of a giraffe. I would hate to be licked by one of their tongues! It would be great to put this all into on paragraph like you would in a story.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Bella, giraffes are quite fascinating creatures aren't they? Well done on describing their features! What do you think your next blog will be about?
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