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Friday, May 1, 2020

pirates


hi this week i learned  about pirates

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Bella Cool slide also the writing was my favourite.But next time add more texted to the paragraph like if it was fun to do or if it was hard to Do.

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  2. Hi Bella, wonderful work! Your writing is really cool. When doing a blog post it is really important to write a bit more detail about what they task was. Remember to think 6.

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  3. hi Bella, I can see you're understanding what you're reading. Good job on finding out what the pirate sayings mean.

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  4. Hi Bella
    Thanks for sharing your pirate slide show. I really liked your story and was impressed that you used capital letters and full stops consistently.
    Your next step would be to add speech marks around the words your characters are saying. Great job

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