Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 1, 2020
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Kia ora Bella Cool slide also the writing was my favourite.But next time add more texted to the paragraph like if it was fun to do or if it was hard to Do.
ReplyDeleteHi Bella, wonderful work! Your writing is really cool. When doing a blog post it is really important to write a bit more detail about what they task was. Remember to think 6.
ReplyDeletehi Bella, I can see you're understanding what you're reading. Good job on finding out what the pirate sayings mean.
ReplyDeleteHi Bella
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your pirate slide show. I really liked your story and was impressed that you used capital letters and full stops consistently.
Your next step would be to add speech marks around the words your characters are saying. Great job