Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
terrific turtles
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
What an amazing job you have done Bella! I am so impressed with you clear, well paced, reading voice. It makes it very easy to understand. You have put the video and photos together well. Great work!
ReplyDeleteWow Bella, this is fantastic! What a great documentary. I like how you spoke clearly over the videos and had the sub headings to label each section. Super effort and great addition to your Blog.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Bella
ReplyDeleteWow, what an exceptional job you have done with this documentary on turtles. You spoke clearly and matched up the video with a a great pace in your speaking voice. What a wonderful piece of work to share. Isn't it interesting that turtles have beaks? Great effort Bella!
I like your work
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